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Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-07-13 06:01 PM



Passionate feelings,
burning like the sun.
You've taken my heart,
and don't know what you've done.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

So utterely confused,
torn between two.
I'm not gonna choose,
can't lose either of you.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Waiting for you,
to apologize.
But it's never gonna happen,
I slowly realize.....

~i kept the right ones out and let the wrong ones in~ Aerosmith~

© Copyright 2002 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Punk Angel
Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US
1 posted 2002-07-13 08:48 PM


I like this one, its really good... um, u always tell me to reply to ur poems, n i never kno wut to say lol so... i really like it, can i put it in my sub?? ~lylas kris
ericaisamonkey
Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere
2 posted 2002-07-13 10:54 PM


heh... it reminds of how i feel right now. which is maybe why i like it so much.. it was very nice and i'm glad i could relate... i hope your "ruff stuff" goes away soon. or at least gets better, email me sometime and we can chat about it...lotsa love

*Erica*   :loveya:

peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
3 posted 2002-07-14 10:52 PM


once again i like i like! :clappin: not sure wut else to say..other than i understand where ur coming from..very good ~Jess

~*~I believe that friends are quiet angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly~*~

IKNAP
Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 47
Torrington, Connecticut
4 posted 2002-07-15 01:25 AM


k im not  sure i know what this is a bout but if its what i think it is then it sounds like you may have some apoligising to to do. Good luck either way!!

"The Fat Man Walks Alone"

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