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Teen Poetry #5

life's lessons...can hurt

akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

0 posted 2002-07-13 02:05 AM

Lifes lessons

Life’s lessons of mercy passing me by
Life’s lessons on joy passing me by
Life’s lessons of love passing me by

My life is empty
My life is lonely
My life is hollow

You’re alone too
You’re lost too
You’re scared too

Why are we alone in this world?
Why is life passing us by?
Why are we trying to survive?

If life has no point
If life has no meaning
If life has no value

Then why live in the suffering
Then why live in the pain
Then why live in the sorrow

This world is tearing me apart
This world is driving me insane
This world is torchuring my soul

My thoughts beyone my control
My memories driving me to the brink of insanity
My mind trapped and tortured

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

1 posted 2002-07-13 03:54 AM

very nice, and it's the truth.. i think i'm gonna look for more of your stuff. i can totally relate. lol. great job

*Erica* :loveya:

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

2 posted 2002-07-14 12:07 PM

you live in this world because you can see from the outside what is going on so as much as it sucks you have to belive in hope i think so anyways good write makes you think =D

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

3 posted 2002-07-14 12:10 PM

awsome , i like reading poetry like this

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

4 posted 2002-07-14 07:13 PM

Thanks for your feedback, i enjoy reading what people think of my poetry...if youd like to email me its [email protected]

Akira
www.poetrypoems.com/akira

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