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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2002-07-11 01:47 PM


Heh - I don't know what this is, I just started thinking about how my boyfriend asked me out, and this is what I came up with...

Its hard to believe its been seven months
Since the night we met – the night I fell in your lap
Was it “love at first sight”? –Maybe – I can’t remember
I think I was too busy falling for you
I guess it must’ve been – it wasn’t long till it started to rain
And I started telling you about the rain
My Grampa watches down on me –
And whenever something big happens
The rain comes down – as the tears fall

It seemed to rain even harder once you asked
What it was you wanted to know
If I’d be your girlfriend –
I told you to look outside – there was your answer
But, what you didn’t know – I had a tear in my eye, too
I knew something was going to happen
The moment the rain began to fall
I knew my heart was yours
And would be yours for the rest of my life

Seven months ago – You walked into my life – silently
Six months ago –  We exchanged  high school rings
Five months ago –  I met your family
Four months ago – You gave me a ring
Three months ago – You held me in your sleep
Two months ago –  We started spending weekends together
Just last month –  We had a bit of a scare…
And now, today – I know I want to live my life with you…

I know it’s only been seven months –
But I love you with all that I am
David – You’ve changed my life…

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Encarta
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world
1 posted 2002-07-11 02:08 PM


That was a great poem   congratulation   ain't love grand
sillywilly
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 33
oklahoma
2 posted 2002-07-11 03:11 PM


great job...i love it!
StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06
Posts 207
floating down a river...
3 posted 2002-07-11 04:11 PM


That was awesome. I liked it a lot. Good work!

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jave
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 18
CO, USA
4 posted 2002-07-11 05:33 PM


How cute! I like this a lot. Keep up the good work.

*jave*

shadowchild458
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MN,USA
5 posted 2002-07-11 05:38 PM


hey! great poem! loved it, keep writing!

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