Titles are hard..could you please read this?

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Titles are hard..could you please read this?

StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-07-11 01:20 AM

I'm still counting the days until your return,
By my calendar there's still 17,
The other night I was listening to one of your favorite songs,
I never told you that it's now one of mine too,
I also never told you that just the thought of your name makes me smile,
While we're on the topic of things I never told you,
There's also the fact that I can't stop thinking of you,
Seriously.
But I can't tell you these things now,
At least not for another 17 days,
But even then I probably won't tell you,
Damn insecurity.

Ok this poem means a lot to me because it's actually true..unlike some of my stuff which is just exaggerated and not based on anything in my life.

"Then again, you're always first when no one's on your side."-incubus
"Nothing's the same when you give it away."-Something Corporate

[This message has been edited by StellarChica (07-11-2002 07:41 PM).]

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-07-11 12:47 PM

I love this....i really do,m and I can explain why, but I really LOVE THIS!

Great job!

~Lisa

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

2 posted 2002-07-12 01:58 AM

humdidum..i really want some people to read this so i'm gonna bump it up a little..

*~erin~*

"Then again, you're always first when no one's on your side."-incubus

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