Teen Poetry #5 |
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Cant trust guys:-) |
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FAITHy New Member
since 2002-06-26
Posts 9NE |
you told me forever but forever has to end forever isnt real im not gonna pretend it never lasted before so what makes us different? what makes you think that we'll some how make it through it? Im scared of being hurt scared of you breaking my heart scared that its gonna end and have my world fall apart too many times i have trusted guys and they've left me neglected left me with all these memories left me feeling rejected i wanna love you i wanna give you my heart but how do i know that you'll be true how do i know you wont tear me apart? i have to let my guard down and somehow let you in break down this endless wall and give into this love even though it might be a sin but forever will i worry and forever will i wonder inside if you are the one for me if you are really mr right I know i have to trust you trust that this is fate prove to me that you love me and get rid of all this hate hey guys this is the first poem i have put in here so tell me what you think please! thanx bunches ~faithy |
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oakly234 New Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 4 |
You know that's a very good poem!! I would have thought you'd have numerous posts beforehand. Even though I'm a guy I still understand where your coming from. When I have gone out with girls before I feel the same way you do sometimes, and when I don't I wonder if the girl feels the same way. But I really enjoyed reading your poem. Good work!! Hope to read more from you in the future! |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I really like this, and its interesting because in all honesty I can not relate... I dont have this problem of being scared of heartbreak....because I never think beforehand. But-I do know heartbreak, and you wrote about it well great job...hope to see more ~Lisa |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
That was such a good poem.so true welcome to pip! I cant wait to see more. If history has taught us one true thing is that no Species can last forever... |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
welcome to passions check your email for a special greeting |
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