Teen Poetry #5 |
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Spaceship Coming |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... ![]() |
Lighten up, enjoy yourself. Find that which makes YOU. At home or abroad, stay true to the tribe. The inner searching, the inner longings, find what is ... the dot for your eye, the shade for your apocalypse, the pill for you to swallow. Whatever you do, don't take this for granted. Each breathe you have won't be drawn again. You will die. First, you will live. Know what is after, know what is before, and know, truly ... is the spaceship coming? Every second that passes you are one second older. You'll never get that second back. |
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since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
I know, I know.... this poem was atrocious, techinically speaking. Poetry, though, is to be true to the poet. I wanted to write this, so I did. For those fans of more... poetically advanced poetry, that will be coming. For fans of this, I hope it meant something to you. Enjoy. ![]() Truly, Titus As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I was going to make some crack about the mother ship coming back for me, but this poem is too good to do that. At least in my opinion it is!!! ![]() |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
good golly miss molly do my eyes decieve me? ti has written a poem *gasp* lol i thought it was a cut poem hun tks for sharin. love ya! robin |
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since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thanks Rhonda ![]() ![]() ~Titus As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Titus! Hi. |
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