Teen Poetry #5 |
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Not Without You (I just can't) |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA ![]() |
Sitting, Sleeping, Waiting, Thinking you're always on my mind. Eating, Running, Driving, Talking you're always in my heart. No matter where I go No matter what I do You are always with me. If I speak, I hear you in my voice. If I sleep, I see you in my dreams. With me, you will remain. Because of you, I sing. Because of you, I strum. Because of you, I am me! You gave me strength, when I was weak You gave me love, when I would cry. No matter where I go Or what I may do I can't go on without you! *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
strong emotions...i liked how you expressed it...great job...enjoyed it and you written it VERY nicely... "You gave me strength, when I was weak You gave me love, when I would cry." someone like that seems VERY special to have..hope things stay that way, Chels ![]() [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Your mom huh? Sure I believe you...not. Anyways good poem and beautifully expressed and dont worry things will get better or at least I hope so. You know you always have me...whether that makes you feel any better or just makes me sound sad I dont really know but at any rate this was a really good poem and I was feeling it. Love ya ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Chelsea I really enjoyed this. I think you expressed yourself wonderfully! Sounds like one hell of a person here. Great write. ![]() |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice writing Chelsea. Everyone has one person they feel like this for. It's good to see you can write about yours. ~AF~ Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me... |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you to everyone who read my poem. It is a truly wonderful person. Good luck in future writings. *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this one. very strong poem here. Very emotion filled.....I liked it. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Lots of emotions here. I really enjoyed this one, Chelsea. You really expressed yourself well. Nicely done ![]() --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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