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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Face descending into the grass Tears engulf my face Cries of forgiveness are forever lost Clouds clutter my mind Paralyzed with fret Your body becomes lifeless Dreams of happiness are now sorrow regret Tick, Tock, Tick, Tock Time at the end of its own sector Realization becomes the key to a rusty door Bury my soul Redemption, nevermore |
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sillywilly Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 33oklahoma |
Its sounds like you are hurting. The poem is pretty deep. I think it is good though. Its good to express all emotions. I hope things go well for you. |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
nice write thanks for sharin! |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
my lord..you are good. Thats going in my library. This is amazing.. Lex...  |
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sixington Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 53Utah |
nice! soulful... |
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