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Teen Poetry #5

Until You Came

Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-06-20 02:43 PM

"Until you came"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Until you came into my life
I kept falling from the mountain peeks
I kept walking the endless roads
No joy in memories
'Cause I was flying without wings
My world slowly seemed to run away
And my reflection laughed at me
Until you came that day

Until you came into my world
To love seemed like a greater puzzle
But you kissed me and it was done
No longer a fosile
Now I know what it's like to smile
To love, and to be loved by someone
I never knew about beauty
Until you came my sun

You're my rainbow who takes my breath away
You're my sunset on any given day
I know how lucky I am to have you
I guess miracles really do come true
Still thanking God for sending you to me
Until you came my way I had no speech

Until you came into my arms
Loneliness was the king of my life
All the emptiness and sadness
It cut me like a knife
Then trust was just another word
'Cause I was running with a blindfold
I've been crying the night away
Until you came to hold

Until you came.......MY WAY!

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

1 posted 2002-06-20 09:19 PM

Wow this was great. i loved this. great job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

2 posted 2002-06-21 02:53 PM

Wow...I compleatly know the feeling. Hope everything goes well for you and keep up the good work!!

~*~*~Night Angel~*~*~

songsoftheaftermath
Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 84
a world of disarray

3 posted 2002-06-26 03:50 AM

nice work bri- now where's my mp3??

keep writing dude.

could the darkness be my friend?

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