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aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

0 posted 2002-06-20 03:42 AM

I dread to sleep each night
knowing what my dreams will be
I lay awake for hours on end
until Queen Mab catches up to me
and when I do finally settle in
your standing there smiling face to face
eyes aflame your beauty radiant
I gasp, I choke, I try to breathe, I can't
slowly you reach out to me
take my hand and hold it near
"Oh Dear"; you whisper in my ear
we dance to timeless tunes
or sail the ocean fair
each night brings something new
something new, something new
but always with you.
always you standing at my side
content to watch me fly so high
on Icarus wings.
And when I fall, I scream
until I understand, it's nothing new
I'm here with you
standing on faerie ground.
We are happy here dancing in the moonlight,
sitting under the stars, listening to the storm
until you start to drift away
and beg me to come back to you.
I try and try amid the laughter fey
but you are gone to the coming day.
I hate to dream each night
falling asleep into you
for in the morning I'll know
my dreams will never be true.

ex animo,
Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

Demonic Illusion
Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

1 posted 2002-06-20 10:43 AM

no reason to rip into this one, its really good

Madness is the gift that has been given to me....Mercyless Fate

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

2 posted 2002-06-21 03:01 PM

aaron woodside-

Beautifully written. QUEEN MAB!!! ^___^ Sorry. Reminded me of Romeo and Juliet. Anyways, I enjoyed the rhyming, though sometimes it was hard for me to find which word was rhyming (in other words, there was no pattern), however, that's not a bad thing. Rhyming isn't everything. ^^

Good to see you posting again!

Leah

Faerie Lick
New Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 9
Curious, so curious

3 posted 2002-06-21 03:17 PM

Rip? Normally I'd love to, but there's not a reason to in this case. It caught my attention at first because I have a problem with insomnia and I wasn't disappointed. I love it when that happens.

Hey, look at me.

songsoftheaftermath
Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 84
a world of disarray

4 posted 2002-06-26 03:51 AM

like leah- queen mab caught my eye and reminded me of R&J too....this was delightful aaron. you're a refreshing writer...keep posting!!

could the darkness be my friend?

SavingGrace
Junior Member

since 2002-05-31

Posts 26
not yet found

5 posted 2002-06-26 10:48 PM

oh my gosh!!!! this is such a good write. words cant express how good this is, i'm speechless. keep up the good writing! i will be waiting for your posts! this is definately one that goes to the library.

~*Grace*~
You wouldn't be so concerned with what people thought of you if you only knew how seldom they did...

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