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BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

0 posted 2002-06-19 04:19 PM

I know I've been gone for a long time, I'm sorry, but I guess you can consider this my re entry to piptalk so long as I'm still welcome that is.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

What do you want from me?
What have I done to you?
Why do you treat me like this?

I thought you loved me
You said you did
But you starved me
You neglected me

I thought you cared for me
You told me that you did
But you didn't beleave me when I needed you
You ignored my pain

You told me I was your baby girl
But I was only for you to get money
Only for you to get attention
Only for you to get benifits

When I asked for something I needed
I had to fight tooth and nail to get
Almost like I didn't deserve it
You were the one who deserved everything

"I had you"
But you didn't want me
"I clothed you"
I went around in clothes that were dirty and torn

Then when I leave
You try to get me back
Then you care about me
Then I'm your "baby girl"

But now I'm not again
Now you don't want me
Now you don't know me
You said for me not to come back

What do you want?
What am I supposed to be?
I can only be myself
Why can't you understand that?

I am your baby girl
This is what I have become
This is what you turned me into
Mother

~*~*~Night Angel~*~*~

[This message has been edited by BrokenAngel (06-19-2002 04:19 PM).]

ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
Junior Member

since 2001-12-24

Posts 36
im a louisiana cajun princess! lol

1 posted 2002-06-19 04:27 PM

wow........ i know thats not the best constructive crit. but thats all i can say..... wow. really hit home for me. keep ur chin up girlie, email me if u wanna talk. as u can see from my sig. my names Maryn, and my email, is TMIAngel4Christ@aol.com

Maryn
* I'm A bOoTy ShAkIn * HeArT bReAkn * PrEtTy HoT * NeVa StOp * ShOrT sKiRt * LuV tA fLiRt * AnGeL bAbY * SpOiLeD mAyBe * PeRfEcT PrNcEs JuSt 4

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-06-22 11:36 AM

You will always be welcome here in Passions

I see you expressed a lot of feelings into this
I just hope things are good for you
Don't bother yourself with too many questions
It'll just drive you nuts

Thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Neosaphire
Junior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 20
Oklahoma City

3 posted 2002-06-22 10:51 PM

It's interesting when you come across a piece of poetry that reads so well as prose too. I like.

Neosaphire
Junior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 20
Oklahoma City

4 posted 2002-06-22 10:55 PM

Ooo, actually, thought on what I previously posted...I could totally see this performed as a monologue. You capture the train of conciousness so well! Anyways, that's my bit, great poem

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

5 posted 2002-06-23 02:51 PM

really stong poem
it takes a strong person to look back at someone who did them wrong-keep on livin!

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

6 posted 2002-06-23 02:51 PM

really stong poem
it takes a strong person to look back at someone who did them wrong-keep on livin!

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

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