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Teen Poetry #5

All I Shouldn't Say

tzaddiqim
Junior Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 15

0 posted 2002-06-16 04:21 PM

I message too late:

I love you
I hate you
I miss you
I loathe you
I crave you
I despise you
I need you
I know this is wrong

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2002-06-16 05:34 PM

~I crave you
I need you
I know this is wrong~

You and I must be like- right there, you know? Completely in sync. I wish at any given time I knew what the heck I wanted.
Why can't anything be simple..?

Short and yet very descriptive, sweet.

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

2 posted 2002-06-19 02:50 AM

short, and sweet, but simple. i think it describes how most of us feel after a break up or something. very nice! ::encore::

*Erica*

ShortSexyAngelOnEarth
Junior Member

since 2001-12-24

Posts 36
im a louisiana cajun princess! lol

3 posted 2002-06-19 05:08 PM

awwwww!

this is one of my faves.
short,simple, sweet, straight to the point.

love it!!!!

Maryn
* I'm A bOoTy ShAkIn * HeArT bReAkn * PrEtTy HoT * NeVa StOp * ShOrT sKiRt * LuV tA fLiRt * AnGeL bAbY * SpOiLeD mAyBe * PeRfEcT PrNcEs JuSt 4

songsoftheaftermath
Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 84
a world of disarray

4 posted 2002-06-19 08:51 PM

loves like that...one minute you hate them then the next you cant live without them then youre in tears cuz you dont know which feeling is which. *sighs* ...good poem...

could the darkness be my friend?

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