Teen Poetry #5 |
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blondegirl10101 Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 16 |
Looking at a picture of you, i feel the need to reach out and pull you from the paper. It is almost as though your sexy eyes are looking right inside my soul, like i am a book that you just can not put down. Your lips are as soft as the wet drops of dew on an early mornings eve. I wish that you felt for me what i feel for you, so i will just love you from a distance and hope you will accept the terms of my affection. For if you do please be warned: I love whole heartedly and will do anything to make you smile please give me a chance i will make this love be worth while. |
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SavingGrace Junior Member
since 2002-05-31
Posts 26not yet found |
i absolutely love this poem. it's so much of what i feel right now. this is definately going to my library. great write. keep loving whole-heartedly, maybe one day you'll find someone perfectly worthy of receiving that heart. i cant wait to see more. ~*Grace*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is totally romantic What did the person say? pretty hard to turn down something as well said as this keep us posted thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
awesome poem-so romantic... o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
awesome poem-so romantic... o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
kinda weird and left me thinking ....i know i know...ppl are going to think about why this one left me thinking when its clearly a love poem....but is it? is it love or lust we're talking about here? anyhow...if its just a crush then its ok i guess for the purpose of the poem...good luck with the hot date could the darkness be my friend? |
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blondegirl10101 Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 16 |
things are getting even better with each day that goes on i want to thank every one who likes my poem |
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