Teen Poetry #5 |
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blondegirl10101 Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 16 |
Looking at a picture of you, i feel the need to reach out and pull you from the paper. It is almost as though your sexy eyes are looking right inside my soul, like i am a book that you just can not put down. Your lips are as soft as the wet drops of dew on an early mornings eve. I wish that you felt for me what i feel for you, so i will just love you from a distance and hope you will accept the terms of my affection. For if you do please be warned: I love whole heartedly and will do anything to make you smile please give me a chance i will make this love be worth while. ![]() |
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SavingGrace Junior Member
since 2002-05-31
Posts 26not yet found |
i absolutely love this poem. it's so much of what i feel right now. this is definately going to my library. great write. keep loving whole-heartedly, maybe one day you'll find someone perfectly worthy of receiving that heart. i cant wait to see more. ~*Grace*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is totally romantic What did the person say? pretty hard to turn down something as well said as this keep us posted ![]() thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
awesome poem-so romantic... ![]() o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
awesome poem-so romantic... ![]() o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
kinda weird and left me thinking ....i know i know...ppl are going to think about why this one left me thinking when its clearly a love poem....but is it? is it love or lust we're talking about here? anyhow...if its just a crush then its ok i guess for the purpose of the poem...good luck with the hot date ![]() could the darkness be my friend? |
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blondegirl10101 Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 16 |
things are getting even better with each day that goes on ![]() |
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