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blondegirl10101
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since 2000-09-19
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0 posted 2002-06-15 04:13 AM


Looking at a picture of you, i feel the need to reach out and pull you from the paper.

It is almost as though your sexy eyes are looking right inside my soul, like i am a book that you just can not put down.

Your lips are as soft as the wet drops of dew on an early mornings eve.

I wish that you felt for me what i feel for you, so i will just love you from a distance and hope you will accept the terms of my affection.

For if you do please be warned:

I love whole heartedly and will do anything to make you smile please give me a chance i will make this love be worth while.





© Copyright 2002 kristin hahn - All Rights Reserved
SavingGrace
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since 2002-05-31
Posts 26
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1 posted 2002-06-16 01:48 AM


i absolutely love this poem. it's so much of what i feel right now. this is definately going to my library. great write. keep loving whole-heartedly, maybe one day you'll find someone perfectly worthy of receiving that heart. i cant wait to see more.

~*Grace*~
You wouldn't be so concerned with what people thought of you if you only knew how seldom they did...

Acies
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since 2000-06-07
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Twilight Zone
2 posted 2002-06-26 10:40 AM


This is totally romantic
What did the person say?
pretty hard to turn down something as well said as this
keep us posted
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
3 posted 2002-06-26 06:49 PM


awesome poem-so romantic...

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
4 posted 2002-06-26 06:49 PM


awesome poem-so romantic...

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

songsoftheaftermath
Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84
a world of disarray
5 posted 2002-06-26 10:08 PM


kinda weird and left me thinking ....i know i know...ppl are going to think about why this one left me thinking when its clearly a love poem....but is it?
is it love or lust we're talking about here?

anyhow...if its just a crush then its ok i guess for the purpose of the poem...good luck with the hot date

could the darkness be my friend?

blondegirl10101
Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 16

6 posted 2002-07-06 05:06 AM


things are getting even better with each day that goes on i want to thank every one who likes my poem
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