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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Is there any such thing as peace anymore? Around us is nothing but pain and hate. Where has the peace and love from 40 years ago gone? The peace and love from an era of war. "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This poem speaks so much truth in the little words that make it up. It's sad when we can't go one day these days without hearing about a murder, or abduction, or some small act of violence on the evening news. And what's even more sad is that this generation (the 80's babies) don't know the difference. Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed it. Nice work. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very sad.....very good question .....wish I knew ..... |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
i try not to think about stuff like that. thinking is bad and only leads to depression, my opinion anyway. i wish the world could be happy, but i don't control much lol. good poem... -fear- "I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work I really enjoyed the read  Andrew |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Interesting ending to the poem. It's still making me think right now. I'll get back to you on that. Thanks for the read hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
this is short, but true...thanx for sharing...... I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Such a very sad message...so well portrayed.  I'm crying for the world.~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Peace is an ideal. There was never peace. Anyhow, I enjoyed this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a little weak. Maybe with some more expansion it would be a lot stronger. The message behind it has the making of a truly great piece. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
short yet such a powerful message! Keep up the good work! |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
short yet such a powerful message! Keep up the good work! |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
actually i didnt find any emotion within your words to illicit any saddness...sorry. perhaps if you DID expand upon your words you might be able to move ppl a bit more. could the darkness be my friend? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hi, Rhonda! Glad I stumbled across this tonight. Being the idealist that I am, I believe that, to a degree, we create our own peace. Peace can be an attitude...a frame of mind.  I liked this little write. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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