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Lost and Never Found
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Lost and Never Found |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Go to sleep Late night dreaming Do not weep Stop the screaming Sink so deep Souls redeeming Lost and never found Count your tiles Hide from sin Fake your smiles slice your skin All your trials trapped within Lost and never found Face your fears alone at last Dry your tears forget the past cheat your peers They’re all a cast Lost and Never found Drop your head into your heart break the thread Its time to start Everything’s dead and we’re apart Lost and Never found |
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SavingGrace Junior Member
since 2002-05-31
Posts 26not yet found |
i love this poem! i absolutely love it. its sooooo awesome. great write. i cant wait to read more!!!!!!! ~*Grace*~ |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
good poem...but a little scary... |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Most poems are scary, at least most of the poems I read in this forum... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Scary or not, this poem was wonderfully written. It's flow was nearly perfect and the images were outstanding, some so very clear, and others hazy. You did very well.  Drop your head into your heart break the thread Its time to start Everything’s dead and we’re apart Lost and Never found Great. Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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ericaisamonkey Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51A little town north of nowhere |
omg!! wow, that was something that was very well written! i'll be looking for more, nice job. *Erica* |
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