Teen Poetry #5 |
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[[sexuality as a mask]] |
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quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz ![]() |
i've only censored one word in this [it's eerily similar to forks] and i hope that it won't be deemed inappropriate. [[please please please]] anyways, some may need to read deeper into it to get the full meaning, but i wish you all well with interpretation. .. ... .... . ... .. [[sexuality as a mask]] Shuffling down the sidewalk, hellbent on getting through the day - [only to trudge miserably through the next] she shoves her hands deeper into her pockets. Suddenly it's not cool anymore. They've all abandoned her [like yesterdays jeans and cheap lines of speed]. The supposed names of former word edited still lingering in her mind... For them it was only a phase. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (06-13-2002 11:55 PM).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sorry..the guidelines do not allow use of certain words. The one you used was one of them. Please try to come up with another word to use. Thanks! |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Wow, word edited or not, this was amazing...I think I agree that it's open to interpretation, but isn't all good poetry? I am truely impressed with this. ~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~ |
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tzaddiqim Junior Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 15 |
This poem is really cool! And it gets better each read (not to mention each interpretation!) Looking forward to reading more! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I hate to give a half-assed reply, but right now I don't have the time to get into it. I just wanted to say that I really loved this poem and I like that it was honest and very true. I got a lot out of this poem and I hope everyone else can too and perhaps even look into themselves and see how it applies to them (in some form or another). Thanks for posting this. [Jaime] "I think I would like to call myself 'the girl who wanted to be God'." Sylvia Plath [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (06-17-2002 10:43 PM).] |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
Reminds me of me |
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