Teen Poetry #5 |
Funeral |
SavingGrace Junior Member
since 2002-05-31
Posts 26not yet found |
On that day Everyone will be there You all pretend to care You will look into my casket And wish I were there You'll cry those tears But I won't believe you I didn't let any of you near I'll be gone Nothing will ever hurt me And I will never hurt you One last time I'll hurt One last time you'll hurt One, Two, Three I'm gone *I wrote this on the night I lost my best friend cuz of something stupid I did. I finally decided to post it tonight cuz I'm down once again and I just happened to have it right here. Great to be alone and crying on my birthday. Sometimes things really suck....* ~*Grace*~ |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Happy Birthday, you are not alone, you are on piptalk with many others this lovely Friday night. I have these thoughts often....who will mourn for me when I die... People will mourn for you and me, we may not realize it now...but they will Great Poem! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Happy Birthday I am sorry you are feeling the way you are....I caught the sadness and emotion in your poem, and wanted to welcome you here and let you know we are glad you found us....cheer up....I hope it all gets better for you....hugssss Lauren~/Greeneyes Its been a long road |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Happy Belated Birthday. Don't be too harsh on yourself. We have to learn to forgive ourselves for what others have done, so I'm sure your friend would've forgiven you too. Don't be too sad. There are times in life when we feel exceptionally down, and nothing seems to be meaningful, but it's just a phase. Life is still around us, and we should not look back on the past. Just look towards the future and learn from the past _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions. The poem was very sad, but I do hope you come here often. Check your mail for a special message. This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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