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Teen Poetry #5

Through The Tears I Cry

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-06-12 10:47 AM

"Through The Tears I Cry"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1:
I would do anything
To have you here with me,
'Cause pictures, notes, numbers,
Old love, and memories.
Can't hold me together for much longer...
For my heart is slowly
Crumbling just like clay,
Because you are fading
Away faster each day.
And it's quickly increasing my hinger...

Chorus:
Just like a flower to a tree,
That's how close I wish we could be.
But I guess wishing's not enough,
When times just like these follow up.
Anyways this is how I feel,
And every bit of it is real.
--------(Pause)--------
If I could only make you see
All this through the tears I cry.

Verse 2:
I would keep the first time
We met my favorite song,
But our fairytale love
Went beyond the word wrong.
I miss you like the deserts miss the rain...
Now I tremble when I
Think of the way you kiss,
And that I have granted
Your e-ve-ry last wish.
Can't turn off the hose controlling the pain...

RE-Chorus:

Bridge:
Everyday's another war of
Keeping my mind off missing you,
But I can't, so I always lose.
No, you won't even talk to me
And it's killing me from inside,
Wish you could see you through my eyes...

RE-Chorus:

[This message has been edited by Hallucination (06-12-2002 10:48 AM).]

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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1 posted 2002-06-13 01:33 PM

You're songwriting ability is very good. In time- perhaps I might see you writing for some big leaguers huh?

Great feelings behind this.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
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2 posted 2002-06-13 09:39 PM

I agree with Jenn.. you write songs well. Personally I've tried and failed miserably so much kudos for you.

[Jaime]

"I think I would like to call myself 'the girl who wanted to be God'." Sylvia Plath

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