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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
Life Sucks and then you die, We must not have cared enough in the first place, Have we done to much damage? Is it too late? Please, I miss you all, we need each other… Why can’t we be friends? Life Sucks And Then You Die Why Can't We All Get Along? My Friends have fallen apart Everyone stabs everyone else in the back It's like March 15th everyday What happened to everyone? I know I'm not totally innocent, but I know I'm not totally to blame Why happened to everyone? **Sigh** When will everything be same? Will it ever? Is there too much damage done to repair? Did we even care that much To let it die the way it did We never seem to be able to get along Some people gossip Some people whine Some people get new friends Some people lie Some people whine Some people think they are better then us I'm not sayin I don't belong in these catorgories I know i do, I don't deney it But it makes me mad how hypocritical we all are Lets get it out there now, Why can't we say what we feel? Conditioned by society to think a certain way Why can't we be friends? |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
This also had some really good vivid ideas in it. You have a nice way of putting real feelings down in coherent writing. ~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You know, that's part of growing up. This is one of the times you will actually see who your real friends are I hope things get better between you and your so called friends and don't blame yourself for what's happening that's the last thing you should do, or just don't do it thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
thanks for ur comments guys! i really wish all my 'friends' could get along... |
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cutiepiesugarbabie Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 110A Cloud In the Sky |
thanks for ur comments guys! i really wish all my 'friends' could get along... |
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songsoftheaftermath Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 84a world of disarray |
hehehehe...life sucks and then you die...the sadistic little old me is laughing at the moment at those words fo yours. but youre right youve got a nice message within this...keep posting! could the darkness be my friend? |
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