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Forgive Me
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Forgive Me |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Forgive me for the time I knocked your hand away when you were trying to brush my hair out of my eyes. Forgive me for the time I never said what I was thinking when you told me the truth and asked me how I felt. Forgive me for the time that I realized that I care, perhaps too much, about you. Forgive me for the time I wouldn't let you know exactly how I felt. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow.  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awesome....I've been there....you seem to be expressing a lot of heartfelt poems lately. I am impressed and eagerly waiting for more.  This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Wow. This is really something! I'm sure such things can be forgiven, just as long as you learn from your mistakes. Try to open up and express your feelings. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I try really hard to be open to people, but it's really difficult. Thanks everyone. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just let the truth out Allysa never hold back, unless it'll be tactless what's up with you anyways? you're never on any messenger  là où est mon amour? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow is right. I relate to this very much. Ouch...this smarts.  That means you've done outstandingly. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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SavingGrace Junior Member
since 2002-05-31
Posts 26not yet found |
wow, this write was awesome. i loved it. so easy to relate to. straight to the point with a great ending to tie it all together. can't wait to see more! ~*Grace*~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks everyone... Acire, I'm just scared. This person is the one person who actually matters a great deal to me and I don't want to loose him. I'm used to people leaving and me thinking that it was something I did that drove them away and I always feel like that's going to happen again. I'm just really scared to open up. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's totally unfair to yourself, if you always blame yourself for things that happen around you. là où est mon amour? |
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