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Little_White_Flowers
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since 2002-01-27

Posts 23

0 posted 2002-06-03 06:11 PM

Dreamer's sing of deaths true romance. Of breathless Desire sealed in
every touch. Love's enchanting rhyme burns immortal hearts. Life is the oil love
is the flame. Written inside his life, the meaning of it all. Joy which drifts
so easy in and out. Her endless love reaching out to the mornings farthest
winds. Writing her sweet poetry in raindrops so clear. The lines rhymeing with a
summer so still.In one sad verse life's gardens can wilt. A sonnet worth
anothers glance. The wonders of death's romance shatters the glass doors of a
life in pain. A poet sighs.

[This message has been edited by Little_White_Flowers (06-03-2002 06:12 PM).]

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-06-03 10:49 PM

This was such an indredible piece. Its amazing how much a poem, a stanza or a line could impact something. Words can take on a tremendous force. Loved the poem!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2002-06-05 12:20 PM

I think this is really really great!!!! So well written!
I especially love these few lines
"Dreamer's sing of deaths true romance
Of breathless Desire sealed in every touch."

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2002-06-06 12:59 PM

VERY well written. I was actually impressed by this poem. I loved the style, the format, and everything said. A very vivid piece.
Hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-06-18 03:52 AM

Little_White_Flowers-
This is a gorgeous write.
I was completely caught up in your words, as I read.
Extremely well done!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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