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Teen Poetry #5

What Do I Really Want?

cutiepiesugarbabie
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky

0 posted 2002-06-08 03:48 PM

Here I am
Do with me as you must
Here I am
You've hurt me before
Here I am
what stops you now?

There you go
Here I stay
There you go
I'm strong again
There you go
I'm on my own

Here I am
I can make it without you
Here I am
You've left me before
Here I am
I prayed for you to come back

There you go
I'm happy to see you gone
There you go
Now I can love my life
There you go
I can be me

Here I am
I'm strong Again
There you go
Please come back
Here I am
Alone again

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2002-06-09 06:12 PM

It's nice to see you have inner strength
What doesn't kill us, only makes us stronger
Great read, thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-06-09 07:26 PM

I liked this poem a lot. It seemed like you basically had all of your inner emotions in tact but here and there your emotions kinda were confused which is very realistic of similiar situations. Great poem..thanks for sharing

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-06-10 09:45 PM

Oh hey this one is REALLY good! Wow, that definately describes what goes on after the end of a relationship. Good job!!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2002-06-10 11:23 PM

I like this one and I hope things get better for you.

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