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Hill's_Chatabox
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since 2001-07-10

Posts 46
USA

0 posted 2001-07-13 02:33 PM

~The News~

I heard some news the other day.The kind of news I dont hear everyday,And I can't help to think what news tomorrow will bring.

~Well Will He~

Can it be true, can there be someone thinking of me to, Not now, not me, how can this be true.
It can't possibly be me, This kind of thing never happens to me.
What can this mean, where will it lead from here, Once he sees the real me, will he still be thinking of me. Will he see trhe real me and want to see more of me. How can this be, I am scared of what he'll think of me.

Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!!

Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it, Beacuse I might do so

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-07-14 03:30 AM

the news poem was very interetsing...sounds like someones showing a lot of love for news

...and the well will he...your thoughts made the poem intriguing for me...as i thought about..the so many girls that would be thinking of me

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-07-14 09:11 AM

*makes choking actions at Albertia's last comment*

You've got a very interesting format for this piece but hey, this is poetry so anything goes.
Look forward to more and thanks for posting.

~AF~

GREMLINS ARE TRYING TO STEAL MY PANTS!!!!!!! *sobs*

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-07-15 01:24 AM

These were interesting, but good. I'll be watching for more stuff you write, so keep posting!

- Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-17 02:33 PM

I liked these.....very nice. I thought you had a creative way of expressing them format wise.
Nice here.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-07-17 07:44 PM

I liked thre 2nd one the best Hill..HeHe...Both had unique formats though. Nice read.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-07-17 07:59 PM

I didn't really like the format here, but I liked what you were trying to express. NIcely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

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