Teen Poetry #5 |
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One Day I Will Fly Away... |
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Eccentric Poetess New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 2 |
One Day I will fly away, You all will sit here and cry, Trying to find a way, To not let me die! Alas! All living things come to an end, Some die happy some die sad, I too will die and let the path bend, And take me to a place I always wished I had! A paradise of mine where everyone regrets my absence, Drinking the wine of despair, While I am away from all the ignorance, With no broken hopes of having someone to care! |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
welcome to passions. i like you're entrance... like a very poetic middle finger. ![]() i hope you don't croak anytime soon. i wanna read some more! ![]() enjoy your stay here. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to Passions!!! I love your first post....this stanza: "One Day I will fly away, You all will sit here and cry, Trying to find a way, To not let me die" I thought was amazing. It really hit me on a personal level. I hope you like it here. I look forward to reading more of your work!! P.S.- please check ur e-mail for a special greeting!! ![]() Sometimes I get so weird |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed the poem and found it to be quite the sad one. I hope you enjoy your stay here....keep posting. ![]() This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hmmm, I'm thinking I like this one! Welcome to Passions! ![]() |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME!!! great write.... I've never seen you on the streets of this town, I've never seen you just hanging around, But you still tell me that you know me... ~Justin Sane |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Welcome to Passions! Loved the poem. It was beautiful. Kielo |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! It's nice to see you've decided to join us here in Passions for Poetry. I hope you enjoy reading poems as well as sharing too. Good luck, and have fun... I can already see that you'll fit right in here You're style in writing is excellent, and I'd love to see more from you in the future. Again, welcome....and thanks for sharing. là où est mon amour? |
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