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Eccentric Poetess
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since 2002-06-06

Posts 2

0 posted 2002-06-06 09:34 PM

One Day I will fly away,
You all will sit here and cry,
Trying to find a way,
To not let me die!

Alas! All living things come to an end,
Some die happy some die sad,
I too will die and let the path bend,
And take me to a place I always wished I had!

A paradise of mine where everyone regrets my absence,
Drinking the wine of despair,
While I am away from all the ignorance,
With no broken hopes of having someone to care!

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

1 posted 2002-06-06 09:38 PM

welcome to passions.
i like you're entrance... like a very poetic middle finger.

i hope you don't croak anytime soon. i wanna read some more!

enjoy your stay here.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-06-07 06:40 PM

Welcome to Passions!!!

I love your first post....this stanza:

"One Day I will fly away,
You all will sit here and cry,
Trying to find a way,
To not let me die"

I thought was amazing. It really hit me on a personal level. I hope you like it here. I look forward to reading more of your work!!

P.S.- please check ur e-mail for a special greeting!!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2002-06-10 06:00 PM

Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed the poem and found it to be quite the sad one. I hope you enjoy your stay here....keep posting.

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-06-10 09:40 PM

Hmmm, I'm thinking I like this one! Welcome to Passions!

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2002-06-11 01:02 PM

WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME!!!

great write....

I've never seen you on the streets of this town, I've never seen you just hanging around, But you still tell me that you know me... ~Justin Sane

Kielo
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since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

6 posted 2002-06-11 05:39 PM

Welcome to Passions! Loved the poem. It was beautiful.
Kielo

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2002-06-12 09:34 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

It's nice to see you've decided to join us here in Passions for Poetry. I hope you enjoy reading poems as well as sharing too. Good luck, and have fun...

I can already see that you'll fit right in here
You're style in writing is excellent, and I'd love to see more from you in the future. Again, welcome....and thanks for sharing.

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donde está mi amour?
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