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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Ramblings Stuck in a moment Stuck in this dream Lost in my heart Not willing to shout Here I stand by And watch as I drown Gargling love As the veins all turn blue Hung up on issues Hung out to dry Died once by hanging By heart strings too strong Love is a killer When handled by fools Breathing in love As the veins all turn blue Stabbed by the knives Stabbed by the words I feel your anger I feel your hurt I’ll let you stab me Just let me love you I’m bleeding out love As the veins all turn blue "Pretend inferiority and encourage his arrogance." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
And look who posts! I was wondering whether or not I should post one of my poems seeing as how I haven't in almost a year, and Lo....I see a new one by you, the Zu. Nice to see this here. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. VERY well done and the thoughts, the love being a killer when handled by fools....very very true, and very perceptive of you to use such imagery and such an analogy. Enjoyed, loved, and inspired. Well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, this was kewl, i havent read any of ur poems lately but i liked this one and could relate...nice job  ~¿Our lives are soap operas, no wonder so many people sit glued 2 the tv watching them.....¿~ |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
She thought that she had lost him she didn't know what went wrong she just couldn't understand it she had loved him for so long. By chance she signed on that afternoon looking for someone else when he asked to talk to her she remembered what she had felt. She still loves him very deeply she'll not stab him like he asks She'll always let him love her... and she will always love him back. That's my reply Andrew. I loved it. I missed you. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow- this was breathtakingly emotional. And I do believe Rhonda's reply was the best I've ever seen from her. This is some wonderful writing here, good to see you post Andrew. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Wow. That's just about all I can say to that. Is wow.  Kristin |
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