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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-07-13 06:59 AM



Dating a guy is like riding a horse.
You fall off,you get back on.
you get dumped,you find a new guy.

guys can be very stubborn,
so you teach to listen.
with horses you saddle them up and make them listen.

guys like to rush into things a lot of the time.
but then also there are some who like to go slow.
with horses you can pick what ever pace you wanna go,
you are in control.
most guys won't let you control anything.

Robin  

ok if this offends any guy that reads this i'm sorry. it's just my opinion. please don't take me seriously.

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-13 03:20 PM


I am not a guy, so this doesnt offend me, but if someone had written this about women, I would be offended, so...

But anyway, it was an interesting poem.  I defintely do not think it was as good as your others, but still, not bad.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

CwboyAtHeart
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2 posted 2001-07-13 04:23 PM


Ah, I am a guy, but it didn't offend me.  I'm not the kinda guy that would fit into anything u mentioned, so it's all good.

This was okay... I've read much better by you, though.  

      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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3 posted 2001-07-17 07:02 PM


I am a guy, a mean one  

I enjoyed this one......keep posting!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymousfemale
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4 posted 2001-07-22 02:34 AM


I replied to this one the last time you posted it. I enjoyed it.  

~AF~

Tearless grief bleeds inwardly.
~ Christian Nevell Bovee ~

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