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My friend
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My friend |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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As i sit here thinking, i wish i had someone to talk to. someone to make me laugh or just a smile. somehow i know what i want to happen won't. you are someone elses. i can wish and dream but it just isn't the same. as long as you are my friend that's all that matters. so firends we will be and i guess that's all we will be. robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
once again good stuff I liked the poem and the flow but um dont' put the picture in your wallet. LOL we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I really liked this poem. It sucks to only get to be friends when you wish it could be more. Anywho, I liked this one, keep writing. - Cody - |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Another nicely written poem. Keep up the great poetry! *Amanda* |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
great piece! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this piece! Well done!  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Short but meaningful words. Good job. Thanks for sharing. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i agree it sucks when you wish what youw ant but cant be...i liekd this poem, Robin  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
aww this is sweet...but the not having of that which is WORTH having is torture...so i guess ill have to leve it there robin...nice poem i enjoyed the short but sweet read.. |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Great poem , I feel the same way about a friend of mine and it really is hard having to face that reality that you will only be friends. |
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Alexia
since 2001-06-07
Posts 164Sweet And Sassy |
I felt that way about a friend too. But now i'm glad I didn't go out with him. Because I wouldn't have him to talk to or anything. I love him to death but as a friend only. I can tell him anything and he listens! Great poem Alexia oh yea .. I like your sig. If I tell you I love you, Can I keep you? [This message has been edited by Alexia (edited 07-21-2001).] |
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