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Teen Poetry #5

Before It Faded

vipersumo
Junior Member

since 2002-05-17

Posts 10

0 posted 2002-06-03 08:22 PM

Before It Faded

I cry for unknown reasons
I want to tell you how I feel
I want you to know the reasons
And why my pain is so real
But I don’t know
If you would care
Sometimes my memories
Are too much to bare.
I want you to listen
And hear what I have to say
Then stay by my side
As I slowly fade away
There is something so deep
Burning so strong
Even though I want to be
I know I’m not wrong.
Everyday I die
Just a little bit more
Slowly disappearing
Fighting my own war
Everyday I wake up
And think how long its been
Since I began to fight
The battle within.
You are the cause of my pain
And the only one who can stop it
I want you to know
I have to admit this
I know you don’t care
I know I’m just a face
But for awhile you made me happy
Because I thought I’d found my place.
Before it faded.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-06-03 11:03 PM

This was a great piece. Ive felt this way before and believe me i know how hard it is to be in that awful place. Im sorry to hear that your so unhappy...i know its hard but keep your chin up and be strong.

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2002-06-06 12:37 PM

I really liked this. I know how this feels completely. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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