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crazymin83
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0 posted 2002-05-31 07:07 PM


It’s time to say good bye
It’s time to move on
It’s time to forget the past
For friends will always be there

As for everyone who reads their speeches
Is a brave person
All though it may be hard you’ll be fine
Just remember everyone’s scared to be on stage

New friends will enter our lives
They will be different
But we must not forget the friends we had in the past
Even if they weren’t in your group

If we lose in touch with them
We will always have the memories
Until we meet again
Good luck
Minna
May 31, 2002

It's hard to forget the past, so fast

Chocolate is like friends, because you can't just have a peice of chocolate. And you can't just have one friend!

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1 posted 2002-06-01 04:14 PM


I liked everything but the line 'for friends will always be there' because i dont think thats true. Maybe its just in my experience that you can turn your back for a split second and people who are supposably ur friends disappear and reapper in your life, but i dont think overall that friends will always be there. I hope for your sake that your friends will always be there for you. It was a very nice poem. Thanks for sharing this minna Nice to see you posting!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

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2 posted 2002-06-10 11:54 PM


Well done Minna. I know how this feels completely. GOod luck with you.

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3 posted 2002-06-11 09:53 AM


It's nice to see such words of winsdom in here from time to time.  I'm definitely taking your suggestions and incorporating them.  Thanks for sharing Minna.  It's nice to see you around again.  Keep em coming

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donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
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