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deadeyes Junior Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 33 |
Self-expression is solemn and language is supressed. We use senses to communicate and we linger with our poignancy. A person whom seeks the answers and finds his sorrows. A person whom finds peace yet suffers and gives amnesty. The true poet is abrasive and shows red beats all around. But the real poet shows sentiment and signs of experience. Whether life is composed of negative n's or we try aspire to a more needy place the way it has to be shared is by pride and contemnent. And N lives with and through us until the clock defines our destiny. [This message has been edited by deadeyes (05-31-2002 05:17 PM).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked the poem. It made me want to inquire as to what the N truly is...would it be the "no"? That would sort of explain the last part where detiny defines us, thus revealing a Y, rather than continueing the life of the N.....is that it? Am i even close? haha A poem well thought out. Very profound.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
wow....deep....what does the n mean? im kind of curious |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh gosh Javi- you're too much. Go elsewhere with your confusing self  heheHowever, in some odd way I'm in agreement with you, "n" most definitly appears to be a negative influence thus a "not" "no" etc... all disapointment or rejection in life so to speak. Thanks for making me think Nice job.Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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deadeyes Junior Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 33 |
Well Javier, just like Justifications(sorry i never sent that e-mail explaining it like you asked for lol) and Red Curtain, I always seem to be amazed by psychological characters beneath the expression that IS poetry. The point of leaving a little mystery and making the reader come out with it's own conclusions..that's why some of my poems end without a cocclusive meaning. Why the N? Considering that there every letter has it's negative and positive side? Well i'll pretty much leave it like that jeje And no, it's not because N is my favorite latter..jaja just kidding. Hey and thanks for posting a message..I thought this one was ending up with ZERO replies..you resurrected it jeje Now that you guys are in Puerto Rico we gotta play I got the drums lol "Silencio..no hay banda..no hay orquesta." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You got the drums?! No way!!!! Dude, seriously...call me or joel....we jam all the time with sascha. Seriously, we have 2 guitars, a bass, and all we needed were the drums, but now that you got them...hmmm I'm plotting evil! mwhaha!! but yeah, the poem was good....thanks for the slight explanation hehe. This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Great write.... can't think of much else to say... I'm not a very "in-depth" person with these reply things... Javi, plotting evil are you? Oh no.... I've never seen you on the streets of this town, I've never seen you just hanging around, But you still tell me that you know me... ~Justin Sane |
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