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babycakes304
New Member

since 2002-05-18

Posts 8

0 posted 2002-05-19 12:07 PM

If i could be born in your tears, I would forever swim in the ocean of your blue eyes.
If I could be born in your heart i would forever beat for me and you.
If I could be born in your mind I would take control and show i care.
If I could be born in by your side i would forever call you mine.

If you were born in my tears, I would never cry for fear of losing you.
If you were born in my heart, it would beat forever, for your near.
If you were born in my mind, I would never stop thinking about you.
if you could be born by myside, you might forever call me yours

babycakes304
New Member

since 2002-05-18

Posts 8

1 posted 2002-05-19 02:52 PM

Can anyone tell me something?

AliveAgain
New Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 9
In the clouds

2 posted 2002-05-19 07:06 PM

awwww this was so good!!!! i would love to feel one second of this. lol, i think anyone would! great write! i can't wait to read more.

~R*

If you would not be forgotten as soon as you are dead and rotten, write something worth reading or do something worth writing.
-Ben Franklin

Who iis she
Junior Member

since 2002-05-14

Posts 41
Some where over the rainbow

3 posted 2002-05-19 08:29 PM

heyy i am new too whats up nice poem i wouldnt exactly write it, it isnt my style. I know what you mean by can someone please say something its hard waiting i know it.

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"Its your body use it because someday your going to lose it"-Jeff hardy

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2002-05-21 02:15 PM

Sweet, very nice.

The repition was interesting.

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-05-21 04:13 PM

Nice.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2002-05-22 08:29 AM

babycakes,

rather clever..i dig the originality behind this post...

i take control and show i care

being the devil's advocate, i would brand you possessive

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