Teen Poetry #5 |
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Your eyes |
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Who iis she Junior Member
since 2002-05-14
Posts 41Some where over the rainbow |
I feel as though sight has left me. Though color were Black and vivid and was dull. As though shapes were unseen and size were unimportant. I feel this way whenever i look into your eyes. however plain you are in apperence you are beauitiful in existance. All there is to know about you is that everyone would love you if they saw what i see when i look into your eyes. **Thanks jamie** Τ׺·. .·º ËriÇ康. .·º×¤Î |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Welcome to Passions! Nice to meet you. A very powerful first post! ![]() ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hi Erica!! ![]() WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Very well written first post you have here!!!! We look forward to seeing more of your work in our forums. ![]() Pls check your email for a card from us. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome welcome welcome, I hope you enjoy it here, I thought this poem was very interesting, good job! "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Nice work here! I like your prose-like style in your poetry, very creative. ![]() Can't wait for more. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
Is there anything more intense than eyes? Keep writing! Neha |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to Passions!!! This was a very good first post ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I liked your first post. Looking forward to more! Karilea |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done. I enjoyed this first post!! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Hey! Way to join the family. Your poem is great, thanks for sharing it with us and i am looking forward to more! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
![]() ![]() Very nice first post! I know you will love it here. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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