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tzaddiqim
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since 2002-02-14
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0 posted 2002-05-13 04:08 PM


This is now
Then is then
Then is gone
Then will not be back

Lets be here
Let us be.
It’s worth the risk
I have pain
You understand
You were there

You make me happy
In a time I thought
I thought happiness was gone
When it felt so low.


But even just being there,
You being there
Makes me happy, makes me not care
Not care whets happening
Whets in the past.

I want to move on
Can’t you see that?
I’m ready, let me
Take the risk for this
It could be good.

Brett

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Kandi
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
1 posted 2002-05-13 05:29 PM


I just wanted to say thanks for posting this. I really loved it - it goes perfectly with a situation I'm going through right now, so if this is true to your own life then your definitely not alone. Great job.

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

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Posts 7665
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2 posted 2002-05-14 09:50 AM


I just wish you the best in your situation.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings
Keep it up

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
3 posted 2002-05-15 11:22 AM


I too wish you the best in your situation. I enjoyed the poem a lot and cant wait to read more!! Thanks for sharing!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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4 posted 2002-06-06 12:18 PM


Good poem, and good luck with what will happen in future events.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

blakloks
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since 2002-06-01
Posts 60

5 posted 2002-06-06 10:14 AM


this really mirrors what many people think. good luck... and oh yes, great poem, hope u haf gotten all that out of your system by writing this poem
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