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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Waking up I think of you- as I stare right through the clouds. Remembering how I had sacrificed sleep, for that discussion on your day. And then the morning, whistles by as I brush my hair, and laugh at my thoughts. And the day drags on, and the laughter it does wane. And my thoughts of you turn somewhat cloudy. Just wanting to exist forever- in those morning thoughts. Tolerating a whole day, just to feel near you... at 3 am. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like someone has fallen again  So, whats goin on jenn, we need to talk When you see me online, drop me a line Thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah, I'm a strange one...hehe I'd love to tell you all about it, just as soon as I figure it out myself Thanks Acire Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
And look what I've brought up from the ashes like a Pheonix rising aflamed with passion and the poetic craziness of a birdlike monster! ROAR!!!!! Anyway, well done on this one. I felt it....i felt it like a needle in my heart because I've experienced these yearning thoughts, these ........yep these yearning thoughts I liked the poem. Well done.....and from your reply in the poem titled 'N'.....yes, I am too much  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I would sigh and say in a whimsical, far away voice "oh, I understand!".... but I won't. It's not my bag. So I'll just say that love is a crazy thing and I think we should all go hug a tree. Great poem... you describe it very, very well. [Jaime] "I think I would like to call myself 'the girl who wanted to be God'." Sylvia Plath [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (06-06-2002 05:07 PM).] |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
reality always clouds our visions of what life should be like... and i always have those thoughts at 3am too. with all the insomniacs in this world, you'd think it'd be easy to find someone to chat with or chill with instead of freezing in the corners of your mind, huddled round the fire of desire... a provacative read. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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