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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Your love is so amazing I lay here at night looking at the sky gazing I cant get my mind off of you I feel like im in love, can this be true? Can this be real There are so many feelings that I feel I feel like your the one for me When im with you iam so happy I feel like iam so lucky to have you To me you are a dream come true When i look in the sky i look at this one star Then i make just 1 wish in my heart I wish to spend the rest of my life with you growing old together I want to spend my life with you forever Someone pinch me i have to be dreaming Still i sit here looking at the stars gleaming I thank god i found you each day when im in your arms it feels like everything is Okay I dont know what i would be where i would be If it was for you never meeting me I have these feelings for you i always will carry I want to be the one that you marry I want to be there for you through good times and bad I want to help you and talk things through when your sad i want to be the one you come home to at night i want to be the one you hold in your arms so tight To me you are my bestfriend If i lost you i could never love again It feels like you know what im thinking you know what i feel This is all too good to be real Its amazing how you meet someone and you know there the one for you You look in there eyes you know they feel it too I know i can trust you i know that i love you and always will This is a feeling I always will feel I can stare into your eyes and see that you love me When you look into my eyes what do you see? When you hold me in your arms i knew its where i wanted to be from now till forever just you and me |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I just hope that this poem tells me that you have found a really nice guy. I just read you other one about a playa, and I do hope that it's not about this guy and you found out bad things after you wrote this poem. You seem so happy in this one and I'd love to see you remain this way. keep it up and keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Thsi was really sweet. I'm jealous. hehehe. Kidding. The only thing that bothered me was that at the beginning- the first lines didn't rhyme..then all of the sudden the poem started rhyming. Weird. other than that- I loved it. You did a wonderful job on this one. I enjoyed the read.  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem....Good luck with the guy and like acire said, hope this isn't about the playa.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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