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Teen Poetry #5

someone save us both

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2002-05-10 12:42 PM

hope is a fragile butterfly
balacing precariously
doing it's wreckless dance
on your fingertips

love is a dangerous angel
that nestles itself in your soul
if nutured and fed
it will grow
or if neglected
it will eat away and corrode

you are both to me
my shining angel, my precious butterfly
and while i hope that you will always love me
and i you
sometimes you have to just let go...
in order to save your own soul

-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2002-05-11 12:08 PM

Yes you do. *sigh*

Nice one.
Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2002-05-11 12:55 PM

Yesh. Sometimes you have to risk all for a taste of love. Yet love is a game of chance where you stand to win the world, failing which, you do not lose a single penny.

"love is a dangerous angel
that nestles itself in your soul
if nutured and fed
it will grow
or if neglected
it will eat away and corrode"

This reminds me of Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet.

"Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs:
Being purged. a fire sparkling in lovers' eyes,
Being vexed, a sea nourished with lovers' tears."

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

layla
Member

since 2000-11-19

Posts 74

3 posted 2002-05-12 12:13 PM

I love it, ur way with words is amazing, and yet so true.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

4 posted 2002-05-12 11:48 PM

thank you all for replying to this, it means so much to me. you're all really nice people. thanks again.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

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