Teen Poetry #5 |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA ![]() |
life is a wunda people think will it eva tak'em unda! but i'm goin to a pretty place no where the flowers grown i be back in a houer or so. i got a lot in my sleave it's difficult ta believe someday i hope ta be free. tha only one who knows iss god he's tha one that gave me a hawt. some times i wunda my my mutha gave me burth some times i ask why i'm even awn earth. but it's nawt my place ta ask some times it's good ta laugh. i'm frum tha E A S T nawt tha W E S T i'm gonna that i'm tha best. FROM DUNPHY AKA KJ [This message has been edited by Dunphy (05-08-2002 01:44 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kevin, your poetry always flows, and it really rocks. ![]() I am starting to get used to your spelling now too ![]() |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - Susan - He talks that way too... ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nan, I bet he is a blast! ![]() |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Great write. It vaguely reminds me of something, but I don't know what... |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh dear, I need some getting use to the spelling... I took quite a while reading the poem, but when I figured it out, it did sound great! ![]() Allysa, it reminded me of something too! No offence to you, Dunphy, but the spelling looks like how Tweety's speech is written. ![]() "I tawt i taw a puddy tat... I did! I did!" _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Enjoyed, the ebonics add effect. I guess we could consider this the new style of writing. Each epoch has its own style, and I'd have to say that this is most definitely a very prominent one. Well done. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
your language really adds characteristics to the writing - i think its cool! ![]() |
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