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In your eyes
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In your eyes |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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In your eyes- a brand new world I see. And all the love I've ever known- comes rushing upon me. I never knew just how you were, or why we've come to be. But when I look, deep in your eyes- I suddenly feel free. And when you leave, me all alone- I just miss you so. Sadness aches from far within- with each hour it does grow. Hehe I just watched this 80's movie and the song "In your eyes" was like reeling thru my head and inspired this "Completely different song-like poem". I just had this little soft jingle in my head to this. So try and read it sing-songy.  |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Awsome piece I really like it keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
ur poem iss very cute i like it and enjoyed it very much i hope you write some more i enjoy your pieces. keep'em commin. love dunphy |
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