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0 posted 2002-05-05 10:00 PM


Misplace are my thoughts
And dreams
From childhood I was force
I came to the top
Only to fell down
On god’s door stop,

You see I never dream of failure
For it made no sense,
I could achieve what I want
Why did I let that in my head?

I am never the best,
As I compete with the rest,
I take it all in and try to relive
Catch up on the stuff that you know
But I can’t do this ****
Anymore,

The pain is not the problem
It’s the struggle I feel,
No finish line in this race-
I have to keep up
Case by case

Through the choices I make
I create my life
And the path  travel
Only  struggles seem to
Unravel
But I am gonna keep on going
New game plan is all I need…



Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (05-06-2002 12:28 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-05-06 01:36 PM


its good to see that you have a positive outlook on all of this. i wish you the best of luck in finding a new plan..im shur you can do it

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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2 posted 2002-06-27 02:01 AM


"Through the choices I make
I create my life
And the path  travel
Only  struggles seem to
Unravel
But I am gonna keep on going
New game plan is all I need…"

i like your resolve at the end there. it makes sense to go on and create a new game plan when things arent going the way you want them to. thanks for sharing

could the darkness be my friend?

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3 posted 2002-06-28 10:42 AM


Thanks for reading my poem an replying to it.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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