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Teen Poetry #5

When love fades away

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-04-25 11:32 AM

I never really asked for this,
so why is it here?
All those things I never noticed,
now seem so dear.
I love someone so much,
but does it really matter?
If the feelings aren't mutual,
the relationship will shatter.
I can't seem to think straight,
'cuz there's so much on my mind.
All the answers seem out of reach,
and there's none I can find.
I feel so lost and confused,
I don't know what to do.
It hurts being near,
but I keep running back to you....
You feed my desires,
and you heal my pain.
But also you cause heartbreak,
but beside you I still remain...
I'll never understand,
just how you do it.
You say you care about me,
but I know your heart is a bottomless pit.
You never once told me how you felt,
but still I stayed.
But slowly, ever so slowly,
the love began to fade......

Pain = Love

~if you want me to fall for you, you gotta give me something worth tripping over~

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2002-04-25 05:43 PM

WoW!! Dis was weally good!!!!!! hehehe I wonder who..dis is bout?? TELL ME!!! lol good write!! all mi love ~Jess

~*~Never take anything for granted~*~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-04-26 12:21 PM

Pain does indeed equal love more times than less. I know how you feel...wonderful job on this poem. Thanks for sharing this with us!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

3 posted 2002-04-26 05:54 PM

My gosh... this was the exact perfect description of me and someone else two years ago... very scary... it brought back some memories I'd rather forget but would do well to remember... Thank you.

Kielo

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

4 posted 2002-04-26 08:24 PM

WOW! I was in a bad mood and didnt feel like responding to posts...

BUT THIS WAS JUST TOO GOOD!

An excellent description of a feeling that is usually really hard to ecplain

I loved it! I really did love it!

~Lisa

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