There is Hope (There Is You)

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Teen Poetry #5

There is Hope (There Is You)

HiddenSparklez
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2002-04-17 02:59 AM

The Barrels will always keep rolling
And the man in the moon will always keep crying
But there is hope
There is you

Strong in truth
Determined with passion
Honest with love
Bold in actions
Unique in personality
Generous in character

A smile so bright, that it could be seen from the night sky
Eyes so warm, that it could felt from miles away
Arms so caring, that safety has never been an issue
A laugh so contagious, that even the ill-tempered must chuckle

Right from the start,
You appeared magically
Right till the end,
You’ll stay spiritually

And when the rain keeps pouring,
And the tears don’t stop coming,
We turn to you
The brightest light in our lives

May you never feel lonely
May you keep dreaming the unreachable
May you realize everything is possible
And may you trust in us always

~I'm trying to write a poem for my best friend's birthday... I'm hoping there will be plenty of suggestions so I can make this perfect. Thanks~

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-04-17 08:03 AM

I thought this was amazing! Im sorry i cant help with any suggestions..im never good with that

I really really liked this and i think that your friend will to! What a sweet birthday present

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-04-18 04:59 AM

HiddenSparklez-
I think you've done a beautiful job on this,
and I wouldn't change a thing.
I'm sure your friend will love it.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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