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Demonic Illusion
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since 2002-02-07
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0 posted 2002-04-16 04:50 PM


Lay beside me under the wicked sky,
Firey demonic visions as we lie.
Tell me what I've done,
Just wanted to have fun.
Lay beside me,
Look at what I see.
Flames of the enraged,
Tears of the encaged.
Tossing and turning,
For the end I'm yurning.
Nightmares and evil glares,
Looking in the faces of icey stares.
Wake the Demon while he's dreamin',
End up in Hell with a new meanin'.


Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

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1 posted 2002-04-16 06:33 PM


yet again another awesome poem!!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

SlowDrag
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since 2002-01-10
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Tx...need i say more
2 posted 2002-04-16 11:59 PM


"lay beside me...under wicked sky" <--metallica lyrics? haha just kidding...
it was good...keep it up

"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

Demonic Illusion
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3 posted 2002-04-17 12:31 PM


yeah it is it fit better than what i was gonna put, someone drove by playin it and i thought it sounded much better so i used it

Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness

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