Teen Poetry #5 |
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Superman |
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Demonic Illusion Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 50 |
Been through Hell and back, Still something I lack. I don't even know who I am, But you still call me Superman. I think I'm caving in, Living with immortal sin. Collapse from the pain, And still you call me Superman. Through my own body I carve, My own hunger makes me starve. No longer wanting to reamin, Yet you still call me Superman. One thing I know why, Doesn't matter how hard I try. I had to fall to lose it all, But you STILL call me Superman. thanks for everything, for always be there for me...hope ya know this Superman things eventually gonna convince me i really am Superman =oÞ Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
So your superman huh?? I liked the flow of this poem and the meaning behind it. Good job ![]() iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Demonic Illusion Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 50 |
naw i dont think i am, my friend believes i am totally convinced and i did nothing to make her think i am....just how she sees me...one of those things with a long story behind it Demonic Illusions, Frostic Dragons, Bloody Tears From Me To You....all surround by a force of Untouchable Darkness |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
ahhh i understand iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
great way of writing a poem, from somebody's view on yourself... wow, didn't even know you could do that! "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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