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TigerZ
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0 posted 2002-04-12 07:00 PM


massaging softly
relaxingly so
cradingly gently
somewhat floating
way up high
upon a cloud
dissolving pain
pressure and problems
flutter away
marvellously(sp?)scented
or just out plain
this is the medication
to be taken
after a long hard day...


=) anyone wanna try and guess what im talking about? any suggestions and plz if you can think of a title for this let me know...

A life without love…is no life at all.

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1 posted 2002-04-13 04:06 PM


great poem tks for sharing!
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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2 posted 2002-04-14 11:03 PM


LoL the only thing that pops into my head is a bath haha but then again i am pretty tired. I liked the poem tho Had a cool riddle thingy goin on!! I like that Thanks for sharin!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

TigerZ
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3 posted 2002-04-15 09:50 PM


=) yay! another reply...=)  ahuh =) i was taking a bath and this all just popped into my head so i had to jump out and write it down before it got lost..lol

A life without love…is no life at all.

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4 posted 2002-04-16 01:37 PM


LoL yay!! I guessed it!! LOL thats awesome..i never guess n e thing lol

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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