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Dunphy
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0 posted 2002-04-09 02:44 PM


Spring is tha season of time an joy
fo evy little gurl an boy.
Tha grass is green tha sun is warm
awl tha dead trees will b tourne.
It's tha season to have some fun
children will come out to run.
Awn some dayz it will rain
I don't know if I'll maintain.
Tha wheatha is warm ski is blue
I'm gonna say I love you.
Now tha flowaz time to bloom
now tha powaz it will gloom.
Now the sun it will set
now I am goin to rest.


                   By Dunphy
                   18 M Cape Cod Mass


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1 posted 2002-04-09 03:24 PM


Kevin,
YES!
so much goes on in Spring, the renewal of things is so wonderful, and it's the perfect time to watch love blossom and grow
very nicely done!!

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2 posted 2002-04-09 10:34 PM


can you please stop siging EVERYTHING with your full name, sex, age and location?!?!

it's REALLY annoying.

nobody cares about where you live or what your entire name is or how old you are.

we want to read your poetry, not your vital statistics.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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3 posted 2002-04-10 08:56 PM


jen chill

hun you have such a cute style of writting i liove it.
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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4 posted 2002-04-11 01:18 AM


what?

it's true.

just voicing my opinion in a none-threatening manner [without insulting anyone or causing any harm, etc].

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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