Teen Poetry #5 |
Spring |
Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
Spring is tha season of time an joy fo evy little gurl an boy. Tha grass is green tha sun is warm awl tha dead trees will b tourne. It's tha season to have some fun children will come out to run. Awn some dayz it will rain I don't know if I'll maintain. Tha wheatha is warm ski is blue I'm gonna say I love you. Now tha flowaz time to bloom now tha powaz it will gloom. Now the sun it will set now I am goin to rest. By Dunphy 18 M Cape Cod Mass |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kevin, YES! so much goes on in Spring, the renewal of things is so wonderful, and it's the perfect time to watch love blossom and grow very nicely done!! |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
can you please stop siging EVERYTHING with your full name, sex, age and location?!?! it's REALLY annoying. nobody cares about where you live or what your entire name is or how old you are. we want to read your poetry, not your vital statistics. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
jen chill hun you have such a cute style of writting i liove it. robin i am me don't tell me different!! |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
what? it's true. just voicing my opinion in a none-threatening manner [without insulting anyone or causing any harm, etc]. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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