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Dunphy
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since 2002-03-14
Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-04-08 11:19 AM


wit life i allways wunda
life will it eva take me unda?
wit wul peace is what we need
as we awl are just young teens.
we be rasin tha streets
turnnin an blastin tha rap beet.
goin down tha road in a two body benz
in tha back seet wit more than one frien.
you know now we nee to chill
we gotts lotts a time to kill.
iss almoss tha en of the day
i can't believe it no way.
some times i wunda life
will it eva take me unda?
that's tha question i allways ask
you know somethin at thiss no laugh.
cawz if i do it will back fire
awl tha people wit me will nawt admia.
you know it's time to flow
awl thoughs ice an jewls it's nice ta show.
it's like you gotts lotts of cash
an people will ask.
where did you get that.
you gonna tell'em iss none of you bussiness
i don't care what you thinkin.
you know goin out to NYC
did you here about the part out in Jerzy?
awl tha fine gurlz are so hawtty
i like tha gurlz to be shawtty.
you know iss awl about fun
before tha breake of dawn.

                    from dunphy
                    kevin reid
                  18 m massachusetts

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1 posted 2002-04-08 11:49 AM


Kevin, your rhymes are really awesome, I just can't get past that spelling lol I suppose that makes me old
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2 posted 2002-04-08 12:46 PM


very good hun. i love your style! just let it flow babe!

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

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3 posted 2002-04-08 01:39 PM


Flowed nicely kev!! Keep em comin!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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