Teen Poetry #5 |
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Life I Wunda Will it Take me Unda |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA ![]() |
wit life i allways wunda life will it eva take me unda? wit wul peace is what we need as we awl are just young teens. we be rasin tha streets turnnin an blastin tha rap beet. goin down tha road in a two body benz in tha back seet wit more than one frien. you know now we nee to chill we gotts lotts a time to kill. iss almoss tha en of the day i can't believe it no way. some times i wunda life will it eva take me unda? that's tha question i allways ask you know somethin at thiss no laugh. cawz if i do it will back fire awl tha people wit me will nawt admia. you know it's time to flow awl thoughs ice an jewls it's nice ta show. it's like you gotts lotts of cash an people will ask. where did you get that. you gonna tell'em iss none of you bussiness i don't care what you thinkin. you know goin out to NYC did you here about the part out in Jerzy? awl tha fine gurlz are so hawtty i like tha gurlz to be shawtty. you know iss awl about fun before tha breake of dawn. from dunphy kevin reid 18 m massachusetts |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kevin, your rhymes are really awesome, I just can't get past that spelling ![]() ![]() |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
very good hun. i love your style! just let it flow babe! i am me don't tell me different!! |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Flowed nicely kev!! Keep em comin! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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