Teen Poetry #5 |
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Flipping The Bird |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... ![]() |
~Flipping The Bird~ ![]() You flipped this bird right off his perch I’m hanging on by twig of birch I’ve always done just what you asked I mimicked you with every task And now you leave me hanging here I ask you why ~ I want to hear Could it be something that I said What was the reason that you fled I only spoke the words you taught And echoed back your every thought I was your puppet on a stage Ventriloquist’s dummy in wired cage So, come back, dear ~ don’t fly the coop You’ve really thrown me for a loop What’s that you say ~ you went for seed I should not worry ~ there’s no need I thank my lucky stars you’re back While in your care, I nothing lack You are the wind beneath my wings You are the tune my bird brain sings You’ve flown into my little heart I knew I loved you from the start So, read my beak ~ I’ll tell you true The bird you flipped has flipped for you ~vlraynes Okay, everyone...come on and participate in April's Challenge I'll be looking for your posts! ![]() "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-05-2002 05:05 AM).] |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
lol That's great! ![]() - Cody - |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
LOL... I love it! |
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ericaisamonkey Member
since 2002-04-04
Posts 51A little town north of nowhere |
LOL very creative, ::applauds:: ![]() *Erica* |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hehehe i loved it vicky!! Interesting and definately unique!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Awww...so cute! ^___^ I really enjoyed this! It speaks volumes in cuteness! AHHH!! *huggles bird* ^^; *flips bird rightside up* Loved the read, Vicky! Thanks a bunch! ^_^ leah "...and sometimes when the music whispers softly in your ears, take some time to dream a dream and put aside your fears..." ~r.h.a.p.s.o.d.y. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*giggles* I adored it!!! definately put a smile upon my face Kristen [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (04-05-2002 06:38 PM).] |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"So, read my beak ~ I’ll tell you true The bird you flipped has flipped for you" ![]() Vicky, I love it. ![]() It was funy in many different ways... I loved how the scene before us chagned from hurt and worry, to encouragement and love. Much indeed a good write. ![]() ~ Titus "Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter" |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
lol it's so fun! and the birdie is so very pretty. this put a smile on my face, thanks for sharing it. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Haha...gorgeous, Vicky. Very creative of you if I don't say so myself. See, this is funny. You want all of us to live up to standards like this? HA! Now that is amusing. ![]() Seriously though, I love it. Comedy is great at the best of times. ![]() ~AF~ "Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vicky, this is tooooo cute.... ![]() |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This Vicky at her Flipping Best... ![]() C'mon guys... You can be just as flippin' good, can't you? No flops allowed.. ![]() |
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