Teen Poetry #5 |
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Seasons |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
Winter to spring, a light airy breeze. Warm sunny skys, replaces deary dark days. Hot Chocolate no more, lemonade glore. From Santa and the North Pole, to the Easter Bunny and a rabbit hole. Winter to spring, the transition has come along. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I liked the ideas, but I found the rhyme distracting, because some of it rhymed, and some of it didn't. I had to reread parts of it because I was listening for a rhyme that wasn't there. Other than that, very cool. Seasons are awesome things... ![]() Kielo |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
oo I wish I had a spring...although I wish I had had a winter...and a summer and a fall... This makes no sense to people that arent from my part of New England |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Well said and thank god for the transition!! Im smellin the flowers and the lawn mowers are starting 2 wake me up in the morning...its finally here!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I love spring and the daffodils..hrm did I spell the right? *shrugs* who cares anyways, cute and sweet just like the breeze the whispers through the trees ![]() Kristen |
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