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Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2002-03-14 02:55 PM

why do people have to be so mean
all the hatred doesn't need to be seen
put it all in the past
every day life is going by very fast

you can return to the light of god
he gave you a heart so very bright
i never want to be alone
all your love will never be shown

now i do feel very glad
all my hurt is no longer sad
now it is for this poem to end
i need to relax and rest my pen

kevin reid
aka dunphy

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2002-03-14 03:46 PM

hmmm i am gonna email you cus i want to lol very nice poem did ya read mine?
robin

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Aerhercnian
Junior Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 10
Listening

2 posted 2002-03-14 04:18 PM

I really enjoyed the read

And there stood Aechercnian silent and calm listening to the trees.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-15 11:35 AM

Nicely done!!! People can be horrible and cruel and very very MEAN..just remember that your better then those people and you can rise above them

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2002-03-16 07:17 AM

Kevin, it's human nature to be cruel and heartless. you'll probably find that on more than one occasion, you've been cold to someone.

The piece itself is well written. Sorry to hear you're going through a rough time. Things'll look up eventually.

~AF~

"Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2002-03-18 01:44 PM

Hey Kevin

You've done a good job here - Now let's see some more of your good work...

Dunphy
Member

since 2002-03-14

Posts 82
Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2002-03-18 01:47 PM

thank you for readdin.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

7 posted 2002-03-18 07:27 PM

Very nice.
Welcome to PIP!

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

8 posted 2002-04-04 01:54 PM

People can be real stupid and insensitive, but I guess thats life,eh? but I really liked this poem..good work, keep it up

Kristen

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