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Teen Poetry #5

Chalice of my soul

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-04-01 04:23 PM

Let me entrance your soul
Slowly place your lips
Upon my soul's chalice
Let it entice
Your thoughts
Invade your body
Come in
Get to know me
Drink
I know you are thirsty
For a little taste
Of what truly
Makes my heart
Run in haste
And even
Understand
Why at times
I get close
When it's too late
I yearn
To let you
In on my little mystery
Embrace the sweetness
Drown within
The satin celestial threads
Of the moon
Purge your mind, body, spirit and soul
Allow yourself
To fall deep within
The chalice of my soul...

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-04-01 04:27 PM

I love it!

Very very nicely done, Kristen!

Love is wanting to drink the other up, to understand them as much as possible, to taste every last drop and want more. The play you acted out in words before us was quite bluntly amazing.

Lovely, dear.

Get on AIM!

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
~ The Night Owl

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2002-04-01 04:28 PM

Thank you, Titus, the ending sucks!!! but obviously you like it

anyways I can't get on AIM but uhh perhaps call me!? *at the library gotta get home*

Kris

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-04-03 01:35 AM

Beautifully done!! Your writing keeps on getting better and better!! Loved the poem..keep it up!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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